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Comments from AnaLewis
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2016-03-19 10:38:42 | The unwitting third wheel or Hailey's story | AMAZIIIIKNNNNGGGG |
2016-03-07 23:11:22 | Revenge, Pt 18: Valentine's Day | Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaasssseeee make another one!!!!!! |
2016-03-18 05:58:45 | Chris and Christie: Making it work part 3 | AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! I am truly sad to see it be over... :( I stayed up all might reading them!!!!! It's amazing!!!!! |
2016-03-18 03:30:27 | Shake It Up: Tear It Up | Umm... I just read all your stories. Firstly, you have an OBSESSION with raping Bella Thorne. Secondly, there's a difference between erotic snuff and MURDER! Thirdly, you write amazingly, your grammar is perfect! You used great words! Lastly, if it wasn't so bloody, murderous, and sick I would've enjoyed it! You would do great with writing regular fiction stories and novellas. :) I tried to say everything in the nicest way I could...! |
2016-03-12 08:13:11 | The Story of Ann Chapter 1: The Beginning | It's a great story, but it has horrible grammar. Maybe you could get someone to proof read before it's posted. |