| 2017-08-02 02:56:27 |
On Saving a Species
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RandyTom, I found this to be a good story. I hope you are planning to write more. |
| 2019-01-11 20:43:45 |
Quadruplet Connection: Prologue and Chapter One - Jean
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This is a great story I have read all the chapters and I want morre of the story. IE What happens next? |
| 2017-05-04 16:42:26 |
"SECRET URGES"
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This is not up to your usual standards. |
| 2017-04-28 03:10:44 |
The Awakening, Chapter 9
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A good story so far as mentioned a little bit too much DOM with Jen I think but it is your story. I am wondering if you are ever going to post part 10? |
| 2017-04-27 02:17:22 |
My Boyfriend Caught Me With Another Woman
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FCE You have some good stories here but they are way too short. You need to expand them by about 8 to 10 times. Also you need to do a deeper character study with several of your characters to flesh them out. To get an idea of what I am talking about look at pars100 for some ideas. |