| 2017-11-21 18:03:33 |
SAMANTHA THE ESCORT
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This was a good story. If someone wants to cast a negative vote, they should give their reason for their negative vote. That would help the writer improve future stories. However; I understand some people enjoy voting negatively regardless of the story. It may be a negative trait that helps their own self esteem. Just a suggestion. |
| 2017-11-21 18:15:45 |
SAMANTHA THE ESCORT
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Okay. As I said in my previous comment, I liked the story. I suggest you eliminate all the “NOWs”because it becomes too distracting. Also, cut down on the use of Samantha’s name. You can refer to her as “she” unless you need to clarify. I would to see a sequel to this story. |
| 2017-10-18 16:19:08 |
Katie’s Sexual Awakening Pt. 1 “Meeting the Teacher”
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Thanks for the critique. I sometimes get carried away and forget whose telling the story. I try to tell it from the P.O.V. of person envolve. |
| 2017-10-10 03:52:59 |
I like to watch boys Masturbate Pt4
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Sarah, I enjoyed all of your stories. They allowed to take fond trip down memory lane. I was 15 years old when had my first real sexual experience with a girl. I traveled with Dad to visit relatives in Missouri. My Dad arranged for me to spend the night at my aunt’s house. They put me on a small cot in the sun room off my 15 year old cousin’s bedroom. I guess they thought it was safe for me to sleep near their daughter. I knew very little about girls or sex. I tried to sleep, but My cousin came to my room and wanted to talk. After we talked for a while she said she wanted see my penis. I was embarrassed and told her no. She talked me in to letting her feel me. She took control and during the next two hours she jacked me off, gave me a blowjob and then taught me how to please her with my tongue. She showed me how suck her breast and introduced me to her clit. All of these were firsts for me. she convinced me to put my penis in her vagina. It was my first time to cum in in a girl. |
| 2017-10-16 13:23:33 |
My Uncle's New Wife; Part 3 Cousin Ashley Takes Charge
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I don’t understand why so many readers think this story is so unbelievable. I had a friend that I went to HS with who was so irresistible, women would not leave him alone. Grown women hit on him all the time. Starting at age 15, he was bed by neighbors, relatives, teachers, strangers and many of the young girls we went to school with. I envied him so much. |