| 2011-12-17 00:16:53 |
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Angel Eyes, my lady friend (my best friend, she is a lesbian as well), loves this story; for me two thumbs up. |
| 2011-12-26 20:05:09 |
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Excellent, very well done. hats off. |
| 2012-01-01 16:37:10 |
Camping Luvie style
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If this is a first story then a good beginning; suggestion is to try and flush out more details. Overall though well done. |
| 2012-01-01 16:39:53 |
Summer Suprise 2_(0)
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Potential, it has potential in a third part. Work on flushing out more details and some parts of the spelling. |
| 2012-01-01 16:42:52 |
Learning The Ropes
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I have not seen this video game others mention of so I will judge it as it stands; good work overall. |