| 2018-12-07 00:12:23 |
Dirty Boy - 3
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Neat ending, well done. And chapter 4? Aunt and mother? |
| 2019-11-28 00:05:14 |
My Sluty Mom_(0)
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Ummmm, that was confusing! Pity, has the makings of a good story. Maybe a bit of re-writing before you have a go at part 2? |
| 2019-12-19 23:53:23 |
Country Mom for a Horny Son
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A good start but you really need to proof read and use the correct words and punctuation otherwise it will be unreadable. You won’t get the fun of being enjoyed and your readers won’t get the fun of looking forward to the next episode. |
| 2020-01-26 00:00:37 |
Mellors
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Nice one. There must be much more fun to relate from the estate. I look forward to reading of it My Good Man |
| 2020-01-26 00:12:09 |
Sinders, a bit of a fairy story
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I’m loving them. Comedy with my kind of fun. Keep it up and the writing. |