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Comments from Dream Lover
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-11-28 09:37:28 | Visiting My Cousins | I actually liked this story a lot. Great pacing and grammar. The plot itself was perfect and your storytelling abilities really made the read an enjoyable experience. I wonder what’ll happen between you and your cousin the next time you visit. And I’m looking forward to reading about it, if you’re so willing to write about the potential future experience. And if this is the first time you’ve written such a story, pat yourself on the back. You did a great job. |
| 2018-11-28 09:37:59 | Visiting My Cousins | I actually liked this story a lot. Great pacing and grammar. The plot itself was perfect and your storytelling abilities really made the read an enjoyable experience. I wonder what’ll happen between you and your cousin the next time you visit. And I’m looking forward to reading about it, if you’re so willing to write about the potential future experience. And if this is the first time you’ve written such a story, pat yourself on the back. You did a great job. |
| 2018-12-01 00:42:41 | Janie's first taste of cock! | Your grammar actually isn’t that off. I don’t think you need an editor. Maybe just proofread once more before posting. Good story though. I like your style of writing. Looking forward to the next chapter in your story. |
| 2018-12-02 04:37:06 | Independence Day - Part 1 | Hey, dude, I really liked your story. You should consider completing it. It’s very unique in contrast to most of the others on here, so it’d nice if it had an ending. I assume you didn’t follow up on it either because you stopped coming here or things didn’t end well with your friend. But if you aren’t AFK, you should consider finishing it because, from a gamer’s standpoint, it seems very relatable and might be the first time I can truly connect with a character in these stories. |