sexstories.com
Comments from Cypriano
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-20 20:19:29 | The sailing club 1 | Too many misspells. Habitually used "west" for "vest." |
| 2019-08-23 05:18:53 | Laura's Dirty Diary - Lunchtime Alley Sex | Lacks reality to anyone over 13. |
| 2019-08-23 15:06:44 | Teenage Hormones_(0) | "travel several weeks of the month"? think you mean "days" |
| 2019-08-23 16:15:06 | Teenage Hormones Pt. 5 | ,,,,and the crowd get larger |
| 2019-09-05 17:19:57 | Gracie is broken | Needs editing; first half, you double spaced, Stopped doing it in middle of sentence, |