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Comments from GustavoVzla
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-06-19 22:35:45 | First Time with Katie | Good job. good story. A recommendation: try to separate the text into paragraphs and isolate the dialogues in separate lines. I will read anything you write in the future . . . |
| 2020-06-19 22:40:14 | First Time with Katie | Excellent first story. |
| 2020-06-19 22:48:01 | First Time with Katie | You have so much potential. . . Try to read the most rated stories and try to learn their techniques and methods. I think you can become a great writer. . . |
| 2020-06-20 00:34:52 | My stepsister Lisa: home alone | I agree with Wilderness Cry Very good first story. Very good distribution of the text in paragraphs and lines of dialogue (that's where many beginners "screw up") but it would be better if the separation between these elements was not so excessive. . . I hope to see your future writings soon . . . |
| 2020-06-20 02:01:05 | Three Daughters......Three Rules | Excellent Story. |