| 2011-01-16 16:43:51 |
Taking of both mom and daughter
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Hey everyone thanks for telling me about the spelling I looked over the story and resent it in I put up the wrong draft look for the corrected draft soon |
| 2011-01-25 12:49:18 |
Bella Ana (Chapter One and Two)
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Iike the way your story is headed keep them up |
| 2011-01-25 12:49:28 |
Bella Ana (Chapter One and Two)
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Iike the way your story is headed keep them up |
| 2011-02-01 21:30:35 |
Taken (Chapter Four): Hannah, Carli, Lucia, Nicolette
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too short and not as much to read as your first 3 |
| 2011-02-01 21:30:45 |
Taken (Chapter Four): Hannah, Carli, Lucia, Nicolette
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too short and not as much to read as your first 3 |