| 2020-03-28 05:27:24 |
Magical Hearts chapter 11
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This is a great storyline. Some of the themes are shared with your other, unfinished., stories. Yet, this mystical take on love and goodness, follows a different enough path that... It stands alone quite well. |
| 2020-04-06 19:13:54 |
Dear Diary part 2 - Tracy's First Time
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Ha... Talk about a fantastic ego fantasy... That would only be considered a rape of a dependent, grieving child. One could only hope that a part 3 would have that ppsychotic pedophile getting arrested. This is a disturbing story. Unlike most on this page. |
| 2020-04-10 23:04:52 |
The game changer 3 - Shopping, CCTV & more
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I'd rein her in and do a little blackmail on a few of the other guys. Then , maybe charge them for access, record their sessions, and then sell those. Take charge of the situation while. Doing my best to wear her out. |
| 2020-04-12 15:46:48 |
Going Nova ch. 9: The Swimsuit Portion
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This one took the condition a bit too far and ,pretty much ruined the story. Sorry to say. Stopping on the runway to masturbate went beyond believability. Also, all of the fucking and sucking inside of 4 minutes , pushed the realism too far. Just my opinion, of course. It just seems that you are more obsessed with humiliating Brie than telling the story of her condition now. |