| 2021-06-16 22:18:43 |
My Neighbor Emily
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Hey, this was a great narrative for a first attempt. Some proofreading, editing and your good to go. Where are you, man? It's June of 2021 now. Did some anonymous jamoke turn you off of writing? You have talent, add another chapter or two to this narrative. It can only get better. You're wasting time and talent. Hope this comment sends you some sort of alert too you. |
| 2021-06-17 03:26:33 |
My Friend My Cousin Marie
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Well done, an enjoyable read. |
| 2021-06-17 04:34:28 |
My Friend My Cousin Marie part II
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Another nice chapter. Don't want to get into the true, not true debate. I don't care really. I'm just enjoying the read. looking forward to the rest. (Hey, they can believe it, or not, it's not as if you need to come up with some document of authenticity or something.) You write very well. |
| 2021-06-17 06:02:19 |
My Friend My Cousin Marie part III
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Really an enjoyable read, can't wait to read what comes next. |
| 2021-06-17 19:17:28 |
My Friend My Cousin Marie part V
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This was a great narrative, but I'm disappointed with the ending. Since this was a true story, I would have liked to have known if they moved on from each other or were able to continue their relationship. |