| 2008-05-11 08:18:06 |
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this is a good one. do you have more? |
| 2008-05-13 13:56:08 |
Public Display Chapter2
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it is hard to believe that in some 2000 readers only one other commented. I loved both of these adventures. it is really refreshing that no one is really gett ing hurt. just humiliated. keep up the good work 10/10 |
| 2008-06-06 21:11:51 |
The Monster Full Story
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I loved the premis of the story. what it lacked was adjectives. For instance instead her labia why not her jucy cunt? those little things would have added more "zip" to the story. keep writing it is good. |