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Comments from OdwickGrimm
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-06-25 05:37:28 | The Business_(0) | Hahah, forgot to log in when I posted that comment. Just clearing that up. Anywhoo. I hope all readers will post a comment, either to critique or praise my work. Please, I love to here what everyone thinks of my descriptive skills and character creation. Tell me who you would like to see more of and what you think I could include to improve. I hope to gather a dedicated, adoring group of friends who will read chapter after chapter of The Business. Thanks! |
| 2011-06-27 20:37:32 | The Business - Chapter Two | Well, second chapter is up as all of you can see. Please rate and comment! Thanks. |
| 2011-06-28 02:50:09 | The Business - Chapter Two | You got it! I should have another up tomorrow or the day following. Just want to actually get the story's chapter overview complete. :] Expect 50+ chapters and more slaves. ^_^ Thanks for following this story! Gives me a reason to continue. |
| 2011-06-28 17:29:11 | The Business - Chapter Three | Third chapter is up, I apologize for the lack of sex but this chapter was mostly for character development. :] |
| 2011-07-01 02:29:56 | Sister's Fate | Most likely reason it was removed was that the sister was under the age of sixteen, which is no longer allowed on XNXX. I am a new member and found this out only yesterday, but yeah, age possibly has something to do with its' removal. Nice story, however. =) |