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Comments from Smooth2011
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2014-07-13 23:02:21 | 16 yr old Jerry and 14 yr old James | a couple of things. Your writing is good, your spelling is horrendous ! use spell check and get the spelling corrected. Then, learn to space your paragraphs. It will be much easier to read. Finally, watch your for your nouns...you intermingled my and me, he and him. |