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Comments from Peter-L
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-07-17 19:06:11 | Marie's Submissive Year - wk 1 to 4 | Are these the wondrous imaginings of a most extraordinary mind, or the undifferentiated ramblings of a restless soul? As of yet I'm still not sure. Should it be seen as something more than a promise of greater things to come, or is it just that; The unfulfilled promise of both the author and her story? Given the breath of the writer's talents, I'd like to believe she'll find a way to make all that come about. And, given what I've read thus far, I personally hope to see that happen. Good job, although you might wish to consider the services of a reasonable competent editor. Just a suggestion. Pete |