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Comments from luvsalik
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-08-14 17:45:55 | Robbie & Eve - I’m right here if you want me | This is the second time I've read your story. I needed a little romance today and when I realised I hadn't reviewed previously, I thought I'd reread and obviously knew I would be in for a heart warming erotic time. Your lead up to the action so to speak was long but I was never bored , never skipped or read fast to get to the good stuff. Your writing was very good, professional and very interesting and I dont think it should be shortened anywhere, but thats just my opinion. it was nice to read a story that was gentle and romantic , not too soppy or too crude. All in all I loved your story and am dearly disappointed you didn't continue . Come back and give us more , as you see its still being read . Thanks for your hard work , good luck to you both, I hope you still share your love . Its very hard to find. Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-08-14 06:56:59 | date night_(2) | Hi Hilfinger, wow what a great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it , my pussy is wet and throbbing after reading that, job done it definitely turned me on . There was enough back story to get you interested and liking the protagonists , I loved the "little" sister and the relationship between the 2. The details about the lack of dating and sex etc is believable, my friends parents were exactly like that ! I loved that it wasnt the typical first time scenario . Your descriptions, especially of jake were excellent I could almost feel his body . The sex scene really drew me in and time slowed , I love that feeling , then speeded up with them . You had me right there in the room. Your writing style is excellent the story flowed nicely all the way through. I hope you post more stories if this is the stsndard of your work then youve got a fan, (a very wet fan too ! ) ;) Thanks for the post , keep it up . Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-05-16 16:58:25 | Clergyman Huntress_(1) | Just finished reading your story, and all in all I liked it. I really loved the the premise, , although I wouldn't have loved the choice of "victims " so to speak, had I been a contestant That said I bet you endeared yourselves to all the fat, ugly, bald, ropey looking men in the world. Lol ! My only criticism , (as I could find NO spelling mistakes, though maybe there are more eagle-eyed critics than I.) Is that I would have liked a more detailed description of the sex acts, purely for research purposes you understand ! Seriously though I would have liked more sexual content, but that's just my preference. As I said I enjoyed it and enjoyed the stories in a story in a story , however many it was !. Thanks for the post. Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-03-25 15:04:31 | Best Wife Ever: 12 Days of Christmas | OMFG !! That was an epic masterpiece, that had me dripping wet. Not whorish and depraved, but a titillating, erotic and horny love and fuckfest between two loving monogamous partners , which is rarety and a much appreciated one. Though I love reading diveres types of erotic literature I appreciate this all the more, I don't as many seem to, separate sex from love when in a relationship, ( at present) I believe in monogamy so anything to spice things up is most appreciated and I will be borrowing ideas from here , thanks ;) Ive always loved xmas ! Now I can do even better ! I really love your writing, you're head and shoulders above the rest as they say , the cream rises to the top ! Thanks for the great work , can't wait to read more. Xx |
| 2015-03-23 22:11:57 | The Break In_(2) | Im reserving judgement on this as I think you're going to make this in to a series, I'd like to see where this goes, I'm not too keen on the violent ones but hey you never know . Thanks for the effort J . Xx |