| 2015-08-01 00:53:15 |
I love Cum
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Totally unreadable. |
| 2015-08-11 23:22:34 |
PASSWORD to my sisters computer
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Very hot story; and MUCH easier to read without all of the "leader dots", (........) that you use in most of your stories. |
| 2016-02-01 23:49:18 |
My Summer Back Home
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Good story, but, you should try reading it aloud so you can find the grammatical errors. The flow of the story was interrupted quite a few times with incorrect words and incomplete sentences. Or have someone else read it for you. |
| 2017-03-03 22:02:49 |
PE class
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Fairly good story, but you REALLY need an editor. |
| 2018-07-14 01:25:28 |
Brad & Cassie
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This is one of the better stories that I have read in a long time. Excellent! Chapter Two, please. |