| 2018-08-10 13:58:00 |
The Island- Chapter 1
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I couldn't even finish it. Do some basic research before writing a story involving the military. |
| 2018-09-06 04:48:18 |
Massage Gone Awry
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Give a few more details about the next sexual encounter. I loved the story but it went from 0 to 60 in like two sentences. |
| 2019-02-22 16:24:51 |
Being More Social - Chapters 1-5
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The only part I did not like was somehow he felt justified in his being angry with her even though he was the creeper following her across town. |
| 2019-03-10 01:23:36 |
Old Friends, New Lovers
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The fact you kept mixing people's names up and spelling them differently through me off a lot. |
| 2019-04-19 14:00:34 |
Learning How to Talk and Act Dirty On Board
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Not into the underage thing. Down vote from me |