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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-08-10 19:09:06 | Hitting the Curve (Chapter 1) | Comment below this is mine. Was logged out for inactivity apparently by the time I hit post comment! :/ |
| 2014-08-20 07:03:40 | Hitting the Curve (Chapter 2) | Working on it. Life got busy, bear with me! I apologize for the wait, but, shit does happen. Thanks for the continued support! |
| 2014-08-18 06:15:28 | She is the One (Part 12) | Jashley, I have been a fan of your stories from the start. They've been a part of the inspiration that managed to persuade me to write on this site also. I wish I could draw readers into my stories as well as you do. You are truly gifted. That being said, I didnt love this chapter. I think one of the previous comments pointed something out (albeit in a overly harsh way) regarding monotony that, for me, unfortunately rings a bit true. Hopefully you can make Jack's story break out of it. Keep up the fabulous writing. Thank you for taking the time to do so. @ Anonymous 2014-08-18 05:31:54 I respectfully disagree. Tara, in my opinion, is a phenomal character, or presence, in the story. She provides an outlet for Jack to vent to, confide in, and basically shut out all the stuff around him. She is not just "filling in space" as you say. I would, however, be interested to see her come into play a little more in future chapters! |
| 2014-08-14 07:40:11 | Hitting the Curve (Chapter 1) | @ Anonymous: Check out Chapter 2! Posted a little bit ago. Thanks for the support! |
| 2014-08-14 05:40:52 | Hitting the Curve (Chapter 2) | @ BashfulScribe, Thank you very much! Your support means a lot to me! Glad you enjoyed this one more! @Anonymous who talks about a werewolf: Nope. Not a paranormal story, sorry! |