| 2010-06-27 18:26:16 |
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Great story! Off to read chapter 2!! |
| 2010-06-27 19:52:30 |
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Ahhhh! NEED Chapter 5!! May I ask that you try to make your stories a bit longer? :) |
| 2010-07-02 21:52:37 |
the devil was a MILF
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Try breaking it up into paragraphs. I agree, great story line, but very hard to read. I felt it ran together, and got a bit jumbled up. |
| 2010-07-14 14:58:18 |
Taking One For The Team 4: Dave's Birthday
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May I ask the (the person below me) what you find so funny? I find this series Romantically hot! True erotica to it's finest!! I have 2 stories posted myself, from a few years ago. Check them out if you like!! |
| 2010-07-14 15:13:53 |
Taking One For The Team 5: Afterparty
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Great story! Keep them cumming!! Ali and Dave are fucking HAWT!! |