| 2014-10-13 00:19:12 |
Path to Our Future part 9
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Great Chapter loved it man |
| 2014-12-05 21:44:00 |
New Life in Rianate 2
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Pretty good story keep it up |
| 2014-12-05 10:49:10 |
Chasing Dove Chapter two
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Really hopes something happens and Hunter and Dove get together. Maybe he gets hurt and sent home and word gets to her. just a thought. |
| 2014-09-22 20:17:36 |
Truths and Betrayals of a Young Man's Heart Chapter 1
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Thanks for those words, actually I am working on getting better, It's like they say you learn from your mistakes will as my first story I learned mine. And I do have someone helping me improve and he one of the best writers I have met on here. My next story will be better. Thanks again. And thanks to the positive comments . Chapter 2 will be up soon. I never quit I just keep going....Hawk |
| 2014-11-02 00:52:22 |
A Family At Odds
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Wow hmmm guess someone didn't really get the point, but that your opinion and not most think that. Nick's point is he doesn't like secrets and when he found his family secret that didn't really fly with him. He lost 18 years from his real parents. And besides if you didn't like it why did you read it. Sorry you feel that way but like i siad it's your opinion. |