| 2014-10-25 22:57:54 |
Swinger Dad
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You make a valid point. I approached the subject of helping to provide for the other girl's baby when I mentioned him offering to take care/watch the baby. And, the other girl wasn't "conservative", she just had conservative tendencies where abortion is concerned... I mentioned more than once that she was 'slutty'. But Ultimately, this story isn't about Erin's friend (she didn't even get a name here): it's about her and her father. I'm debating a part two in which Erin's friend would play a larger role. I might even give her a name! |
| 2014-10-10 00:16:43 |
The Vampire Girl (chapter 3)
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The moderators are refusing my story due to age. I guess they either didn't actually READ it or they dont care. Either way, I'm not going to 'fix' it--the age factor is as important to the story as her intelligence and/or skin condition. It can't be changed without ruining the story. Message me if you would like me to send a copy so you can finish reading. |
| 2014-10-10 00:53:27 |
The Vampire Girl (chapter 3)
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No, you had that right--mostly. Her body was normal for her age. she was an adult and could produce nude photos (though never did) but she couldn't publish them--she was allowed to have them in a private collection. The story followed until Mike and Penelope were very old (and still together, of course). |
| 2014-12-02 22:49:51 |
Cherry (chapter 2)
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I'm starting chapter 3 right now! |
| 2014-09-30 03:52:07 |
Avery
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How do you say the two stories have the same plot??? One is about a girl that initially tricked a man into starting a relationship with her and they ended up being soul mates. The other is about a guy that helped a friend in need and subsequently unknowingly met/married his biological daughter. I understand there are similarities, but to say they are the SAME is stupid for lack of a better word. As for "proper cooked", have you actually read most of the other stories on here? (No offense to any other writers; there are plenty of great stories here!) |