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Comments from Dadachum
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-10-21 22:13:39 | Invisible Minds | Great story, great writing! Maybe a more detailed description of Emma in the next chapter? By the way, please make another chapter. Mind control stories are always a treat! |
| 2014-10-23 17:30:56 | Malpractice Chapter 2: Practice with My Sister | Any opinion as expressed by one or more characters do not necesarily reflect the opinions of the author (me). |
| 2014-10-20 19:18:20 | Malpractice Chapter 2: Practice with My Sister | Dear Anon#2 Thank you for your excellent example of constructive criticism, and I will try to do that. Thing is that my writing is very fast-paced, so detailed descriptions often have to put in afterwards, which is, well, not as fun. But I hear ya! |