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Comments from alandee
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-12-13 07:30:44 | Shelly's Secret Chapter 1 | Shame shame. You shouldn't steal people's stories and claim them as your own.If you had done a better job of copying and pasting you wouldn't have had so many errors, but where you added or changed details is where those errors all seem to be. |
| 2018-12-24 07:37:18 | Love is all that matters pt1- Stairway to heaven | Popcorns???? Also, you need to get those ages correct. You say you are 18 and your mom is 34. I'll let you do the math. |
| 2018-12-30 09:44:43 | Swinger Dad | You memorized her "little man." I doubt that there is a woman alive who has ever called her clit her little man. Why open condom wrappers to poke holes in them. Can't you just take a needle and poke holes right through them while they are in the wrapper. I just stopped reading this ridiculous story after the little man comment. |
| 2019-01-30 01:03:41 | Sex education_(4) | Loved the story but i just need to make a quick comment regarding the timeline. If she was born in the early 1900's and was in her 50's when all of this took place then it would mean that the internet didn't exist yet, which means she couldn't have been on any website , such as Literotica. |
| 2019-01-31 03:34:04 | No Angel (1) | I enjoyed the story but couldn't understand why you would tell the story in the first person and moments later in the third person and then switch back again. ( “I’m afraid so. I’m bushed.” Which was in fact a lie. He was wide awake but was eager to get her back to the van as he fully intended fucking her brains out.) |