| 2015-08-30 06:57:07 |
Who just fucked me?
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1MTNMN45, thankyou so much! :) And yes I'll sure try to make the errors as minimum as possible! |
| 2015-08-30 06:53:53 |
In the family (part 3)
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DirtyOldManII, no it's not a fantasy. I don't know, I read a couple of brother and sister stories here and wanted to write one, that's it. :p But thanks, for your compliment :) |
| 2015-08-19 20:06:34 |
In the family (part 2)
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Anonymous reader at 20:05:33 thankyou so much, and yes I'm a girl. And yes I'm working on the next part, it will be up soon. :) |
| 2015-08-12 19:47:05 |
In the family (part 1)
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Anonymous reader at 18:59:59, nobody forced you to read it, and if you found errors, why didn't you stop reading at that very moment? I was too tired to read the whole thing again and correct the errors, and I wanted to post the story, I didn't come knocking at your door to make you read this 'shit'. And about the 'foundation of literature' yes, I'm very particular about grammar and punctuations too, but this isn't an exam, and as I said, I was tired to read the whole thing again just to correct some typos. |
| 2015-08-13 20:55:25 |
In the family (part 2)
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Anonymous reader at 20:08:06 I got one more comment sayjng this story was similar to kinky vanilla, I haven't read that story, but now I think I will. And about the italics, well usually in a lot of books the thinking part is written in italics. And the name is surely a coincedence. I hope you will find the rest of the chapters different and new, I'll write difrerently if I see similarities between this story and someone else's. :) |