Hello dear readers. What a trek we have been on with A Family Betrayal. I know some are wanting it to end where others want it to continue...I have some good news and some bad news.....Hawk's computer has died so for the time being A Family Betrayal and It's A Good Day to Die are finished. Until Hawk can afford to buy a new laptop or fixes his old one we are died in the water.
Now on to some other stuff.....for those of you that keep posting the story if too long...get over it. You see it continuing just stop reading. No one..and I mean NO ONE is forcing you or begging you to read it. It isn't like school where you have to read it because there will be a test on the story. For those of you wanting quicker chapters Hawk and I both work forty plus hour work weeks. I work for the largest retailer in the world. My schedule changes almost on a daily basis. I work one morning to then have almost eighteen hours off to close. I work in anywhere between three and eight departments a day. When I get home I try to work with Hawk on getting the chapters done quickly and on a semi regular schedule. I know I have missed some spelling and what not so give me a break. Hawk is in the medical profession so his schedule is just as bad...he works twelve hour days to then try writing to relieve stress and try to give you a good story.
He has had a couple bouts of writer's block and for that we both apologize but there is nothing either of us can do. I tell him to try and I can correct it but he doesn't want me having to basically rewrite a whole chapter. When he sends me future chapters we will try getting them proofed and sent in. I know we have discussed doing two more chapters for XNXX...the next one to show what we had planned and then the final chapter which would skip something like ten chapters just to give you the finale. Its A Good Day to Die is kinda planned like that too now. Hawk regrets starting the posting of it since we had upset more people then appeased.
Hawk and I are working on a couple more stories before the computer's death....a lumberjack one, a vampire one, and a few more.
I just wanted to give everyone an update on the status of the stories and hope that when we post again that we will not have lost all the readers.
Just for fun some fun facts......
Allison and Lindsey were never meant to be introduced as full time characters.....they were designed to show Heath's love for his kids.
The Alabama crew were also not meant to stay around...Sierra and Mandy were while the other just visit. The fight with Karl and Tyrone was supposed to happen in OK where Justin gets his head busted open for Lucy and Sasha to baby him while he messes with them calling them sis making the others laugh. Simone, Vanessa, Damon, Gray and Kevin just got sprung on me too. I had to start tweaking some parts to make them make sense.
They while line of Diamond's brother....well that was my screw up. I forgot Gavin died and was like,"How about we have Gavin come back and we find out he is Diamond's brother..." Hawk was all for it until he sent me the chapter with a note,'Dude I killed Gavin....' I was like oh shit until I wee what he wrote.
And for a good final fun thought.......the story is NOTHING like the original.
Originally we had Maggie coming back to find Heath and Tiffany who have Karen. In this Michelle and Travis are so warped to have them be beaten and discarded being broke....Heath and Tiffany have a couple more kids. The next variation was the same as chapter one with Jasmine being with Heath but Tiffany comes back with Karen to find Jasmine with Gregie. In this we kept changing back and forth on which girl dies so Heath can have sadness but that healing effect.
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