This is the first story I've ever written. It is pretty short, but I just wanted to experiment a little. Please feel free to leave any and all constructive criticism.
The Bathroom Surprise
It was 9:00pm and I had just turned off my laptop. “That’s enough for today”, I said, getting up off the couch and putting my computer on the coffee table.
“Damn clients always expect me to bust my ass for them.”, I mumble under my breath. Just as I get to the fridge I fell my pocket buzz.
“Do you wanna come to Hannah’s with us?”. I noticed that I was added to a group text with three of my buddies.
Carson, Ben, and Danny, where my three closest friends, although we hadn’t seen each other much in the last few months, not since we graduated college and all started working.
“Sure”, I replied back, thinking it would be good to see the boys again, and get out of the house for once…plus, I could use a drink at my favorite bar.
“Awesome, meet us there at 9:30”, they replied.
I threw on some jeans and a button up, short sleeve shirt. I looked in the mirror.
“Not bad”, I thought, looking at my fairly slim body. I stood at six feet even, and had medium hair I had pulled back.
I quickly ran outside and hopped in my old, beat up Toyota Tacoma and drove the 15 minutes to the bar.
I parked my truck and walked up to the door.
“I.D.”, said the bouncer, obviously bored. I handed it to him then walked into the dimly lit bar.
“Over here!”
I looked and saw my three friends all waving me over. “Oh man! It’s so good to see you man!”, said Carson. “Man, I haven’t seen you guys in forever”, Danny exclaims as he orders us a round of drinks.
“I can’t drink too much today guys”, I said. “I have to work with a client in the morning.”
“Awwww come on man”, moaned Ben. “We all wanna hang out”
We all laughed as Danny came back with our drinks. We toasted to our new lives, and being somewhat successful after school.
After a couple of drinks I realized that I had to take a piss. I told my friends that I was going to take a piss and that I’d be back. I walked to the back of the bar and pushed the door open to the toilets.
I looked around and saw that both the urinals were still out of order since the last time I was in here eight months ago.
“Ah well”, I muttered as I walked to the last stall and pushed it open. I unzipped my fly and aimed for the toilet. As I was pissing, and enjoying my buzz, I looked around the stall and noticed a glory hole cut into the wall.
“That’s weird”, I thought, “That wasn’t here the last time.” I watched it as I finished up. Two small fingers reach through the hole.
“Hello?”, said a quiet voice from behind that wall.
“Uhmm hi?”, I mumbled as I stared at the hole.
I heard a small giggle as she opened her mouth and put it to the hole, sticking her tongue out. “My master said I can’t leave until I get five guys off. Can you help me?”
I stared in disbelief as this younger girl, maybe nineteen or twenty, was asking to get me off.
“Uhhh how’d you wanna do that?”, I asked stupidly as she kept her mouth pressed to the hole, waiting in something to fill it.
“Stick your dick in her silly”, she said with a giggle.
I stood there for a second, debating on if I should do it…I didn’t want to get an std or something.
“How about just a handjob?”, she said, scooting back from the hole and peering through it with her big blue eyes, and blonde hair hanging in her face.
I looked down and saw that my cock was rock hard. “Uhhh sure, why not”, I said, letting my lust take over as I stepped closer to the wall and shoved my average sized cock through the hole.
“Oh! Thank you, mister!” she whispered as she grabbed my throbbing member gently.
I gasped as she gently began to rub her small hands up and down my dick. She moaned softly, “Oh, it’s so thick” she moaned, rubbing the tip of my cock with her other hand.
The compliment made me even more on edge, as I had always thought I was rather thick. I thought back to my past girlfriends who struggled to take my girth, before being brought back to reality by the unknown girl spitting into her hand and rubbing it along my cock.
I moaned quietly, hoping she wouldn’t hear as I leaned into the wall, shoving as much of my cock through the hole as possible.
“Should I suck it, sir?” she asked as she stroked my cock from the base to the head and back down, over and over. “Mmmm yes you should, but, pay attention to the balls too”, I managed to say it in, what I hope was, as stern voice. I know she said she had a master, so I was hoping she wouldn’t take offense to me taking some control of the situation.
“Mmmm of course not, sir”, she replied as she quickly sucked the head of my cock into her small mouth. She began to swirl her tongue on my glans as she cupped my balls and rolled them in her hand gently.
I bucked my hips into the wall, trying to force my dick further into her mouth. She seemed to have gotten the message as she sucked most of me into her soft, warm mouth.
“Mmmm good girl”, I moaned as she began to slide my cock out of her mouth.
“Thank you, sir”, she said, happily, before sliding my cock back into her mouth, and then bobbing her head on it.
I held onto the wall, enjoying the feeling of her soft tongue and lips on my cock. I was holding back my orgasm as she kept going.
Finally, I got brave and said, “Take me all the way, slut.”
I felt her smile around my cock when I called her a slut as she immediately responded by burying her nose against my pubes and taking my cock down her throat. She held me there for a few seconds as I felt her throat twitch around my cock, before she gagged and slide my cock out of her mouth.
She gasped a few times before opening her mouth and taking me all the way again. This time, I slide out a bit and then thrusted my cock into her throat. She moaned around my cock, but never pulled back as I began to face fuck her.
I Fucked her face, varying my tempo as she gagged and moaned around my cock. When I got close I stopped and pulled out of her mouth.
“What’s wrong?”, she asked, after coughing a few times.
I decided to lie as I slowly came down from the edge. “Oh, I’ll never be able to get off from just that.” I said, hoping she’d come back with renewed fervor.
“Ohhh, well all you had to do was ask, mister”, I heard her move around and then saw her ass pressed against the hole, her clean shaved pussy and tight little asshole on display.
I tried to stifle a moan as my cock twitched. “Good girl”, I managed to get out as I reached forward and gently rubbed my fingers along her pussy.
“Pussy only”, She said, “master said my ass is for him only”
I smiled and softly rubbed her pussy lips with my finger tips. I felt that she was soaking wet, and actually seemed to be turned on by this. I stayed silent as I slowly slipped a finger into her tight pussy. I nearly gasped as I felt how tight she was, even with only one finger in her.
“Mmmmm”, she moaned as she pushed back into my finger. “The last four guys came in my mouth and left before I could get off”, she pushed back harder as I fingered her, slowly stroking my cock.
I pulled my finger out and tasted it before sliding two in. It was even tighter now, as she moaned louder and pushed against me at a steady pace.
“Please, I need some cock, sir”, she moaned as she bounced her ass against the wall between the stalls.
I pulled my fingers out and dug out my wallet, looking for a condom. She moaned in desperation as I flipped through my wallet, not seeing my condom.
“I don’t seem to have a condom”, I said, cussing at myself inside for having removed it at some point.
“That’s ok” she said in a moan. “I’m clean”
I didn’t hesitate, and grabbed my cock. I rubbed my cock head on her clit as she pushed against the wall desperately. “Please sir”, she moaned, “Please put it in”
I wasted no time and, while holding the base of my cock, I slipped the head into her tight pussy.
We both moaned as my cock stretched her little pussy.
“Mmmm deeper”, she cried as I began to push my cock all the way to the hilt into her little pussy.
I grunted, knowing I wouldn’t last much longer, as she began to push back and grind on my cock. I felt her finger playing with her clit as I began to rock my hips back, sliding my cock out of her amazing pussy.
She cried out at being empty as she pressed against the wall harder. “Fuck me, please fuck me”, she moaned as she played with her clit.
I obliged and thrust my cock back into her suddenly. This made her squeal as I began to fuck her at a study pace, my orgasm drawing near.
“Mmmmm yes, I’m gonna cum, sir” she grunted out as I thrust in and out of her pussy.
“Me too” I moaned as I buried myself to the hilt and began to shoot rope after rope of hot semen into her womb.
She squeezed hard around me, moaning incoherently as she rubbed her clit and squirted onto the floor, and all over my balls.
I leaned against the wall and panted as she rode out her orgasm on my cock. She slowly pulled herself off my cock. “Thank you!”, she said gleefully.
I began to come down off the high and realized that I had cum inside of her.
“Are you on any birth control?” I asked, as I started to freak out.
“Nope”, she said, as I heard her pull up her pants and open the stall door. “but master said I got a reward if I came back pregnant.”
I heard her close the stall door and leave the bathroom as I slowly composed myself and walked back out to the bar.
“Haha hey man, have a case of the shits? You were gone forever” I heard my drunk buddies making fun of me as I sat down at the bar next to them. “You wouldn’t believe me if I told you”