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Comments from MerrySm
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-12-19 15:07:37 | My Virginity given to someone I'll never know at the BDSM club | Your stories are so well written and enjoyable. You are one of my favorites here. I wish you had done a few things better here. It was too quick, no segway, no build up, from the limo to the bench. Then no buildup to taking here virginity and the hooks in her nipples as well as her clit. You don't pierce cluts, only hoods. And the anal sex needed more prep. What's goi g on in her head? How does it feel to be groped? All in all i do enjoy your stuff. Keep writing. |
| 2019-07-27 17:34:53 | The Triplets | Childish and way over the top. Too much exaggeration and the description did NOT have snuff in it. No I did not waste time reading the entire story. |
| 2019-09-02 21:27:01 | A FAMILY AFFAIR: DADDY KNOWS BEST | I expect a hot story and all I get is gratuitous mean cruelty. wtf |
| 2019-09-09 01:00:08 | The Subway Ride from Hell | Too short. Good germ of an idea, would love to have more detail. |
| 2020-03-25 16:45:02 | Coward Little Housewife | Please continue to write. Editing is needed but not too much, because it is your 'writing voice' that is hot. |