| 2018-12-29 04:38:58 |
Taking Ownership
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This is a very well written story. It is clear you have great knowledge of what you have written about. I liked the way you fully explained what was in the slave's head. Pretty well got into what was in Lenny's head also. Your final great point was how you brought up to be a great dominant, you should have experience as a true and total submissive. Not many understand this. You did a great job with your story. Keep it up. |
| 2018-12-29 20:49:42 |
Hell House
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Nice job Randy. I like your style and the way you communicate the true mind games and power exchange involved in your stories. |
| 2019-03-18 07:03:03 |
I Really Wanted Him More Than His Mom Part 1
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Thank you ALEXZANDER2040, I appreciate the time to write the comment. |
| 2019-05-21 12:52:29 |
The Transformation of Jesse
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Nicely done and so true how many CDs start out in a similar fashion minus the stud with a 10 inch cock. Guys starting to cross dress you nailed though. |
| 2021-09-19 14:54:12 |
The Pressure Relieving Boy
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Nicely written. You include many aspects of the boy's thought process and develop him fully. What happened with the boy and his daddy over time I suppose will tell the story as to whether this was truly abuse, a boy entering the sex trade, or a gay soul learn to deal with his inner self. It could go either way as long run positive or negative. I hope in the long run daddy turned out to be positive and truly loving and caring. |