| 2020-09-15 13:26:47 |
HOBO 19 & 20 ( The End)
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As always great work. |
| 2022-02-09 14:15:36 |
CAHILL--Part 4 of 6
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Hey I love your writing but there's two things I noted. The first being you said the police have a M16 and it fires 5.62mm. This is inaccurate as the police are not allowed to have M16s, they have AR-15s. Secondly they would not be firing a .50 BMG as it is an antimaterial rifle and likely to pass through the wall of the building and deafen the hostage. |
| 2022-12-22 19:33:37 |
Good Neighbors Chapters 1 & 2
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Hey I haven't even read the story, I'm just glad to see you writing again. You're definitely one of my favorites on here and I hope you continue to write great stories. |
| 2022-12-23 09:46:25 |
Good Neighbors Chapters 1 & 2
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Hey I haven't even read the story, I'm just glad to see you writing again. You're definitely one of my favorites on here and I hope you continue to write great stories. |
| 2023-03-13 04:42:09 |
Caleb 27 – Back again.
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Where's chapter 26 |