| 2014-12-05 04:47:34 |
Breaking Descent: A Temptress born
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It takes something special to hook me in. This was well written with excellent imagery and character. It had original moments and turnouts. The ending however, was a sudden bit of a shocker I felt. I'll accept it, but it was possibly to early in the eventual story. |
| 2017-06-02 23:20:49 |
Only Girl in School Ch 4: a Frankel story
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I'm unclear as to what was in the pit. Is is supposed to be open interpretation or was it past failed girls? |
| 2012-12-04 18:34:20 |
Turbulance
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Thank you for writing about her. |
| 2012-12-04 20:06:07 |
Gang rape for fun and profit
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Very descriptive. Awaiting more. |
| 2012-12-12 02:40:48 |
High School Hell part 2
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I liked it. However, I agree with the others (nice or not) that it is very short and needs more detail. As anon so eloquently said below, read and learn from other stories here. |