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Comments from Clayton Long
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-04-28 08:26:44 | Wedding Orgy | A pretty hot story but I think it could have been improved by giving more of a sense of what you were feeling at the time. Still, it did make me hard and that's always good. |
| 2009-04-28 09:16:58 | A cruise to remember | Totally hot story, loved every moist, cum-soaked inch of it. |
| 2009-05-09 13:48:03 | WIFE CAUGHT AND PAYS | Not worthy of a comment - not even this one. |
| 2012-06-04 22:29:33 | My Fathers Boss | Quite well written, hopefully will develop well with different combinations in further chapters. But why so many categories? Latex fetish, masturbation, exhibitionism, cuckold?? Less is sometimes more. |
| 2012-11-17 01:19:09 | Coquette and her cuckold (Part 4) | Although I posted this under 'True Stories' it is, I must admit, not entirely true. Certainly part 4 is entirely fictionalised and the story should not be taken as condoning murder in any circumstance. As Hollywood often describes it's movies, it is "based on actual events" but as I continued writing, I took the liberty of embellishing some parts to improve the narrative (hopefully). I added the murder in order to round out the story and supply a hopefully surprise ending. Although I use the first person, my writing should be seen as no more supporting lethal retribution than, say, an Agatha Christie novel. |