| 2014-07-06 23:50:32 |
TXR-92U-2280 – Call Name: Sara – Part 2
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There seems to be a large gap in the story between one and two, perhaps you are thinking of posting them out of order? Also i like the story will it be culminating towards some sort of freedom or escape? Otherwise it seems to make for a depressing read with no real goal for the main character. |
| 2014-05-12 01:22:09 |
Giving my virginity to an older man
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I liked it, it didn't have that faked i had 10 orgasms while being raped bullshit. You should write more about learning to like it... |
| 2014-05-20 03:49:10 |
One Rainy Evening Part 1
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I think you'd have a higher rating on this story if the description had included the fem-boy portion. It's still a well written story but some people are probably taken back when they get to that part of the story...but please write more. |