| 2015-05-15 23:25:04 |
A Family Betrayal Chapter 21
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another fine installment. as for the negative person hawk is telling the story the way he wants if you don't like it either don't read it or try and do better |
| 2015-05-05 14:06:25 |
A Family Betrayal Chapter 18
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Love the story. For kia it is probably nick Tyrone Siera' s younger brother that was born at the same time as Mandy from a family at odds |
| 2015-04-12 04:15:52 |
A Family Betrayal Chapter 10
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Hawkrider I think my account is working but can't figure out how to pm you on my phone. Damagedman |
| 2015-04-16 21:51:36 |
A Family Betrayal Chapter 12
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another great job eagerly awaiting next installment. just don't hurt the kids that is 1 thing i couldn't get with |
| 2015-04-17 15:55:05 |
A Family Betrayal Chapter 12
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love this story here is some things that i noticed that i am not sure others picked up on. the results of spring break lead to two connections that would help the story. the first that everyone is aware of is the connection between shellie and abs, but the more important one that hasn't really surfaced was the connection between jacman and who he met. that connection will probably result with a connection to nick from "a family at odds". also there is another connection were faye helped with the wedding of maya from 'truths and betrayals of a young mans heart". that is where i see the backup to fight tyrone coming from, but i will say again that i love how this story is playing out. hell hawkrider could even include a character of any kind for me and name him jamie and that would definitely make my day. damaged |