| 2015-11-27 17:27:28 |
Mistaken when drunk, pt. 2
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These two stories are great! How bout a number 3?! |
| 2017-10-13 19:02:11 |
Lisa's Night Out
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Just couldn’t read this. Fix the paragraphs/punctuation. |
| 2017-10-13 19:02:15 |
Lisa's Night Out
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Just couldn’t read this. Fix the paragraphs/punctuation. |
| 2019-10-29 08:00:40 |
My new next door neighbor_(1)
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Hard to read, I only got to him getting back on the elevator. Definitely has potential, but no excuse for the 1/3 person and misspelled or wrong words my/you; thought/though. Please repost after editing, I do like your other stories though! |
| 2021-05-22 11:39:32 |
Inviting the new neighbors to a BBQ - 4
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I loved the first one, 2nd was still good, and 3 was okay. However, much like the other comment, just don’t like the direction or care for it anymore. |