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Comments from Jax_Teller
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-01-18 00:03:08 | One Thing Leads to Another: Semen is Mostly Sugar? | Maybe it was a joking comment about the anal. |
| 2016-01-22 21:39:53 | Senior Moments Ch.6 | The reason why it seems different is the original first two chapters were wrote many years ago. Many of my stories were wrote over ten years ago, some finished, some missing an ending. I think the rushed aspect is I have been trying to write better grammatically thinking more about the words how they fit together instead of just writing. I really need an editor, so I can focus more on writing. Thank you for your interest |
| 2016-01-24 15:56:38 | Riding With David Lee | David Lee was pronounced, day vid leee with a southern drawl in quick order. He did not like being called David. And yes I understand it can distracting to the story, I was using it as my memory recalled. In hindsight, I should have just changed his name for the story. It just felt wrong to me, like I wasn't giving credit, it was / is after all his story. And no this is not 100% an accounting, but I know if the real David Lee were to read it, even with a name change, he would recognize it as his life. THANK YOU for the feed back. I am trying to use the he/him/her more in the next chapter, but in reading the text with more than just two opposite sex characters the importance of who is ( He ) referring to becomes and issue. |
| 2016-01-27 15:25:50 | Riding with Martin | The second part is posted and should be avail as soon as the back log allows. |
| 2016-02-07 16:21:22 | One More Door | While I do read a lot of stories and I am sure some of that comes out subconsciously I have no need to copy someone's story. If you read the first part I am sure you see it is original, this part is a continuation, As a writer it is getting increasingly hard to vary the mechanics as not be ordinary. As for L, this is another one of my stories that was rejected by them. |