| 2016-10-05 23:10:43 |
Meeting James Chapter 6_(1)
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My vote for best writer on this site! Melanieatplay delivers another thoughtful, soul-baring, and very sexy chapter. I think I speak for most of us when I say none of us like James, because we wish we were him! |
| 2016-10-13 01:50:13 |
Feels Like the First TIme
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Completely loved it, very erotic. I thought it was totally realistic, especially how the first time pretty much sucks! That's probably more true than having fireworks the first time for most of us. Outstanding writing, as always! |
| 2016-10-13 01:56:32 |
Meeting James Chapter 6_(0)
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Agree with NC Couple, this is totally fucking hot! Whomever down votes this has their head up their ass. Nice job! |
| 2017-01-20 22:22:01 |
Perchance To Dream
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Okay, FINALLY somebody got the joke about Alice! The only reason for her character's name being Alice is so I could use that line! I guess most people are too damn young to remember the boy named Arlo. There's a couple other easter eggs in here, too. There's a guy in Chapter 3 named Gene Felder, a nod to Gene Wilder (RIP) and Don Felder. Thanks to all who've read and upvoted me! |
| 2017-01-20 22:28:21 |
Perchance To Dream Pt. 3
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A 4th chapter is rolling around in my tiny brain, seems like some of you want one! I've got another, much older, story that I need to finish up first, though. Then maybe we'll come back to this one! I know folks were disappointed that Jim and Mel didn't ride off into the sunset. People just have to realize that Mel had a life before Jim met her, and things don't always go the way you want them too. I was trying to be realistic with the story. Thank you for reading my stuff and for upvoting me! |