2017-12-07 19:44:14 |
The Punishment_(4)
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Great story, it left me wanting more. More of the back story, and of course what happens next. |
2017-12-07 19:57:23 |
Beginning of a Party Slut
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Another good story. Had a few minor spelling and grammar errors that took away from it some. You need to have someone else proofread for you, to help clean it up some. |
2017-12-14 18:40:48 |
The Break In_(3)
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Part II |
2018-01-09 23:19:51 |
My Wife's Students
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Great story, hope to read more of their adventures |
2018-01-12 20:39:14 |
Truth or Dare with Beth, Part 4
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That was a great story and very well written. Really liked all 4 episodes. |