| 2017-07-03 20:30:24 |
The Man Of Sin: Chapter 6_(1)
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This is a great story, a mixture of dark power and sex. This has been my favorite chapter thus far. I would have gone a different route for her punishment but I must say, well done. |
| 2017-07-18 21:03:06 |
Cheer Raider & SABRE Panther Episode 5
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Ive read all of these thus far and it trully has potential. If you made each segment a little longer and more detailed during the sex scene and other detail like what they do at school then you have a true winner. Keep it up im wuite curious were this goes. |
| 2017-07-18 23:52:08 |
Lost and Found Chapter 2
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This is a really good story. So far the details are great as well as the subtle hints tossed in. You make the characters realistic and a great story. Cant wait to read more. |
| 2017-10-21 19:40:05 |
Well, That Backfired_(1)
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This was a great story that had you going from start to finish. I can't wait to read more of what you have to offer. |
| 2017-10-21 19:40:09 |
Well, That Backfired_(1)
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This was a great story that had you going from start to finish. I can't wait to read more of what you have to offer. |