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Comments from happyhornydog
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-10-09 21:22:27 | Meeting the Aunt, Pt.4/Conclusion | Yes thank you another great read. Plot is good narrative lifelike. Editing needed on this chapter. You change from third person to first person a lot in the early paragraphs. Almost seems like you have rushed the write or repeated the story from another context. Tidy it up it still deserves top marks. Cheers |
| 2020-10-09 21:24:18 | Meeting the Aunt, Pt.4/Conclusion | Yes thank you another great read. Plot is good narrative lifelike. Editing needed on this chapter. You change from third person to first person a lot in the early paragraphs. Almost seems like you have rushed the write or repeated the story from another context. Tidy it up it still deserves top marks. Cheers |
| 2020-11-26 15:09:29 | Dog desire - Chapter 7 | Hi great series of stories I have just read all seven in the past day. Love your writing style, brief stories with little extraneous padding. I’m posting on here as well, but am now changing my style to shorter stories. You seem to have a good knowledge of sex between dogs and women, do you have personal experience? Keep writing I think many readers enjoy your stories. |
| 2020-11-24 23:12:29 | My Stepsister | Hey great read, really kept me reading wanting to get to the horny stuff. I get annoyed when some stories on here are full of grammatically errors and misspelling. Yours was perfect I didn’t notice any errors. I’m a male but felt the sensuality of their orgasms. Thank you I will read more of your stories. |
| 2020-11-24 23:12:37 | My Stepsister | Hey great read, really kept me reading wanting to get to the horny stuff. I get annoyed when some stories on here are full of grammatically errors and misspelling. Yours was perfect I didn’t notice any errors. I’m a male but felt the sensuality of their orgasms. Thank you I will read more of your stories. |