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Comments from bigbrother07
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-01-28 15:59:56 | A Peculiar Girl's Best Friend Ch.1 | Your story is not bad, there is just a lot of rambling. A lot of bouncing from present to past tense. Some grammar and spelling errors. It had a good flow and other than your character being underage, it is not a shipwreck. Read other stories and model after some of those, if you want to be a good writer. |
| 2021-01-28 16:02:26 | Rachel's Jouney from virgin to nympho | Yummy beginning |