| 2020-01-27 04:54:32 |
Young awakening (redone)_(1)
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You need to break the long paragraphs up. They are too difficult to struggle through. About 10 lines is long enough. |
| 2020-02-04 07:44:30 |
Stuck with the Grand Daughter
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Your story is good, but please watch your spelling. PENIS, VAGINA. Better to use 'cock' and 'pussy' when writing sexy stories. Try to get someone to check your story before publishing. |
| 2020-03-15 04:57:57 |
True Massage Parlor Story Chapter 1 - Steph and My First Assjob
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Thanks for the story. I have been a massage freak for the last 50 years. i enjoy the variety of girls and their techniques. PM me if you want to discuss further |
| 2020-03-26 00:20:46 |
Scottish Student gets her Start
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A very nice first go! Hope there is more to cum! |
| 2020-04-01 00:05:50 |
Dear Diary ~ 3.27.2020
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Very sexy. Wished I'd met you when I was at High School |