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Comments from strywriter
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-10-22 00:01:18 | Pleasure Island: The Bikini Chapter 3 Alternate Ending | Ties in perfectly but unfortunately there were a lot of editing issues, misspelled words, or missed used words like your rather than you're. Just little mistakes that we all make if we don't sit the story aside and carefully proof read it. But again, this chapter ties in perfectly with the previous one and was pretty hot. Being bi and a creampie eater, I could have had more of that but it is your story not mine. |
| 2021-11-02 19:39:00 | In the Flesch | Very good story, short, full of cum and the hero gets the woman! |
| 2021-11-03 17:19:37 | My Discovery..con't | Wow, hotter than a chili pepper!!! Excellent story! |
| 2021-11-24 17:44:16 | Being a twin does things to you... | A very good start, but as others have pointed out, proof reading is critical and can make a good story that much better! |
| 2021-11-27 01:47:40 | Naked Day - part 30 - Reunion | Finished Naked Day and it was quite enjoyable. As you told me once, in order to do a series, people have to accept and like or at least relate to the characters, and I liked all of them and can certainly relate to what it is like seeing other men do my wife. |