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Comments from BiStander
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-01-09 19:07:24 | Potential 10 | It's great to see comments on older chapters. I keep an eye on these things. Your comments are awesome. |
| 2009-04-22 14:56:11 | Obsessed with doing myself | Honestly that was based on something that really happened to me and it never happened again, so I'd have to make something up for you. I might. |
| 2009-04-28 12:49:41 | April's Revenge | A good story, thanks, but a better knowledge of grammar and a thorough proofreading would have improved it greatly. Some comments, if I may. “gapping asshole” –“gaping asshole” ? The possessive of “my body” is “my body’s” not “bodies”; the latter is the plural. “it’s” is the contraction of “it is”; “its” is the possessive case. “started their decent” – “descent”? “call the shoots”?. Good calls and you're right. Want to proof read? PM me. |
| 2009-04-28 23:49:17 | My Niece the troublemaker - Ch. 1 | I made that previous comment and then realized I was logged out while reading the story. Why do you get logged out? |
| 2009-05-01 10:54:38 | My Neighor's Incest | Keep looking for part two. It takes 4 or 5 days to get a story posted, plus I have to really proof read it. I noticed mistakes here just scanning it. I don't know how I miss them. Probably because I read it 50 times writing it and I read right over them. |