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Comments from BiStander
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-07-16 08:13:45 | My Neighbor's Incest Part VII | unoimgood Sorry, but I have other things and recently had writers block really bad on this one. Part VIII will be right arond the corner. Part VIIII, no promises. To those missing the incest. Just because Joe has been getting most of the action doesn't mean that's all there is. You can't have everything in every part. Who knows what will happen at Thanksgiving? |
| 2009-07-17 20:32:19 | Quieting the Storms for Katie | "If you wanted to tell a story of young teen girls, why would you give one huge tits that would make her look older? I don't get it" Hum, I don't know. But leave your username and next time I'll consult you before I write a story about my fantasy. |
| 2009-07-21 17:24:53 | My Neighbor's Incest Part VII | just a question, Around what part do you think this series will end? When do you want it to end? I don't know what the ending is, so I'm not sure. I want it to end soon. |
| 2009-07-24 09:20:15 | Football Fantasy Part 1 | Work on spacing, paragraphs and story development. This is more like a short fantasy than a story, which is not bad, but if you want to write stories you need to spend more time working on it. Bistander |
| 2009-10-25 20:18:24 | It's sad that a writer has to write every story to satisfy everybody! No, that's not going to happen. That's why there are many different writers writing different types of stories. And, we even have categories to choose from, so we don't have to read something we aren't interested in, to find out what it's about. Just keep writing whatever you feel like. You write well, even when it's off your normal style. I hate some of the stories on this site. Even, some that are mine. But, this one is good. BiStander |