| 2011-12-10 12:55:07 |
My First story part 1 & 2
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Though the writing is terrible, the story is sort of cute and keeps my attention. This could play out well. |
| 2011-12-25 10:08:19 |
My Sons Girlfriend
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good story, keep going |
| 2012-01-23 15:02:57 |
What happens under the covers...stays under the covers... Part 3
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The best line of the story was when Sarah whispered in her dad's ear about Claire. “You wanna fuck her don’t you, Daddy?” I about shot my wad right then. The next chapter please. |
| 2012-01-23 15:07:20 |
What happens under the covers...stays under the covers...
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Amazing story. I loved it. |
| 2012-08-15 21:49:08 |
The MILF chronicles: Tiffany_(0)
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Descent story line; a few typos. Paragraphs too long. Gave it a positive though. |