| 2012-05-26 07:48:45 |
GIRL'S CAMP COUNSELOR PT 4
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This was published in the 1970s as "FLP-135 Girl's Camp Counselor By Paul Sutherland". At least give the credit to the author who you copied it from. |
| 2012-05-26 07:49:09 |
GIRL'S CAMP COUNSELOR PT5
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This was published in the 1970s as "FLP-135 Girl's Camp Counselor By Paul Sutherland". At least give the credit to the author who you copied it from. |
| 2012-05-26 07:49:29 |
GIRL'S CAMP COUNSELOR PT6
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This was published in the 1970s as "FLP-135 Girl's Camp Counselor By Paul Sutherland". At least give the credit to the author who you copied it from. |
| 2018-07-02 12:27:50 |
A twisted game
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You are mixing up your narrative between first person and third person. Need to keep it consistent. Looking forward to the next part. |
| 2018-07-02 12:28:03 |
A twisted game
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You are mixing up your narrative between first person and third person. Need to keep it consistent. Looking forward to the next part. |