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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2015-04-05 02:03:51 | Hot Box Chapter 6, 2 Important Words | I must say that I really do appreciate the comments and votes that I get for my stories, especially the negative ones. It drives me to want to write more when I see that someone is so moved by one of my stories that they have to be negative about it. Forget the fact that the writing style might have been good, or the story might have been a bit different, my story moves them to the point of being negative about the entire project, like Miss ToucanPlay. This disgruntled lesbian dislikes virtually every last piece written on this site, and she makes no bones about showing it. It's a shame that there are people like that when this is for nothing but entertainment. For the rest of you who have read my story and find it agreeable, Thank you for your kind comments and your favorable votes. It is people like you who make it worth my time to write new stories. Mike |
| 2015-05-03 05:16:14 | Thanks | I will freely admit that I had the TJN series taken down. It was just too much of my life laid out there on an open platter for all to see. I have had numerous requests to repost the series, and I will admit that I am giving it some thought. I never realized that my family would be so interesting to so many out there. For those of you who have read my stories and know my family, to a certain degree, I am obliged to say thank you. This story was inspired by Erin, my daughter. She consulted with me and read through the story as I laid it out. So in effect, you have read a story from her. She does appreciate the kind words and the well wishes, as do all of us. But on a personal note I want to say thanks to my readers. Your support has helped me through a very difficult time. As to wither or not everyone agrees to it that is another matter. As for me, it provides the fuel for me to continue writing. Thank you all. I really mean it. Mike |
| 2015-05-03 05:43:55 | Thanks | Thank you for the literary appraisal. No applause, just throw money! Mike |
| 2015-06-28 16:12:53 | The Golden Rule | In answer to your question, this is a story from Erin although Saki did help a bit. The girls write the story and I type it into a word program that this site seems to like and I submitted it for them. It does answer the question of why it was that Erin always rode my son's bike around. And as for Toucan. I just look at her negativity as a positive. Unless my stories don't effect her at all, I can always look forward to them having some kind of impact on her thus the negative vote. It's actually a win/win for me and the girls. Mike |
| 2015-08-08 12:32:31 | My First Girlfriend_(2) | Your story is not bad but try slowing down a bit. There could be a bit more detail and some better transitions between events. And definitely use a different format to write your stories. It is difficult to read a story when it is one huge block. I use Microsoft office and I double space between paragraphs. It works rather well and will make the story considerably easier to read and to follow. Not a bad attempt at story writing. Just work on your form a little and define your paragraphs a little better and you will have a winner. Good luck. Mike |