| 2014-07-03 14:09:18 |
A Chance Encounter Part V
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Excellent, you really need to keep this going. It's a brilliant story |
| 2014-08-04 20:53:15 |
The Captive -2 A Double Belt Neck Tie party
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Get a dose of reality, let her go. It's unbelievable, unrealistic, and unbelievable. It's not in the least entertaining |
| 2014-12-20 09:47:11 |
Oh, to find her now
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This is brilliant. I personally think that there is a lot of scope to follow it with a part 2, quite easily. Please do I for one would love to read a second part. |
| 2014-11-20 15:38:23 |
Returning Chapter 03
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This is nearly 2yrs old. Is there going to be another episode? If so when? This is a really good story. |
| 2014-11-04 01:41:52 |
Let's Talk
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Hi there Bashfulscribe. Well done with the story. Personally I think our hero should run a mile in the opposite direction from Nicole. However that's besides the point. Please don't screw around with the story. Please just stay true to yourself and the rest will come good. Ignore those cretins that slang you and Jashley13 off. Even a retarded half wit has a right to an opinion, even if it did take the entire brain cells from the rest of the abortion bucket. This is a Damon fine series that gives a little colour into one's life. Please carry on as you see fit. |