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Comments from Wraith666
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-05-04 10:37:42 | Naughty School Girl | Well done as an initial story. Kudos baby. |
| 2012-05-15 09:06:26 | Caught You Looking | Great job baby. Looking forward to reading Part 2. Great first story sweetie. Keep em cuming. Definite positive rating. |
| 2012-05-15 09:26:03 | Caught You Looking Chapter 2 | 19 years young, good story and I gave a positive rating. Just suggesting you proof future ones. Caps, punctuation, etc. It makes it easier for the reader if the basics are accurate. It's been said to 'write about what you know' . Keep those breasts large baby. Lol. Good story. Have you considered an incest approach? Just a thought, but it would explain why her brother was so upset- jealousy. Thx. |
| 2012-05-22 00:44:52 | I Spy on my Big Sister | Enjoyed it very much MB. Well done. |
| 2012-06-21 10:47:01 | Daddy's Belonging | Great story. Hope you continue it. |